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camera work.

good filming steady use of camera
shots used were different and good
good locations, nice closeups
good view of reactions

editing

good moderate pace
suits th tempo of the song
good cuts, however some shots were to long

effects

we havn't used enough effects
kate swears
still works, even without effects
jump cut good


mise-en-scene

punt is good, liked th shots used in cafe and other areas

performance

is good but very repetitive, but with editing could have potential
very good performance from both characters and look real and not cheesey
good movement